Sunday, December 6, 2009

Response

You have brought in many good examples to support your answer on what it means to be human. I would like to see you further develop your answer by bringing in a quote to support your point about the witches and/or Lm. I like how you have also given modern day egs as well. You mention that he becomes insane. What do you mean by insane. You need to make sure that you define your terms and then bring in eg to show how he fits the mold. Overall a good explanation of your EQ.

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